slipstream

slipstream critique

provisional

Critique

  1. 01

    What did you notice first?

  2. 02

    Where did your eye go next?

  3. 03

    What feels too dense — or too empty?

  4. 04

    Which boundary helps you understand the structure?

  5. 05

    Is the red carrying meaning?

  6. 06

    What would you remove first?

WATCH FOR

  • Every region becoming a card
  • Red used as atmosphere
  • Density without orientation
  • Large type without an argument
  • Rules that do not explain a relationship